Questions of the Day--SHOW vs. TELL
Practicing SHOW vs. TELL
TELL: He almost drops the cat box.
SHOW #1: He swings at them, letting go of the cat box.
SHOW #2: He swings at them, the cat box slipping from his fingers.
My question is: Is SHOW #1, enough showing?
Or do I have to upgrade it to SHOW #2?
Or are both okay?
TELL: He almost drops the cat box.
SHOW #1: He swings at them, letting go of the cat box.
SHOW #2: He swings at them, the cat box slipping from his fingers.
My question is: Is SHOW #1, enough showing?
Or do I have to upgrade it to SHOW #2?
Or are both okay?
posted by Shalla at 4:10 AM
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